Wednesday, February 27, 2008

57. Heartbroken - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. CITY STREET - NIGHT

  • A PAIR OF FEET pound against the pavement, worn tennis shoes slapping the stained cement.

  • SEAN runs, sweaty and frustrated down a deserted street.

  • SEAN
  • Come back!

  • He pants, slowing. Ahead of him a WOMAN with bright red hair trailing behind her in loose braids looks over her shoulder and the runs faster.

  • She turns a corner and he runs faster, trying to catch up.

  • He rounds the corner and sees her slipping into a dimly lit bar at the far end of the street.

  • Sean slows, catching his breath, and jogs to the bar.

  • He reaches the entrance and pulls open the door, struggling with the weight for a second.

  • INT. O'HENRY'S - NIGHT

  • Sean enters the bar and stops suddenly. The bar is filled with identical looking women. They are all the woman with red hair.

  • The room becomes silent, and all the women turn to face him, staring him down.

  • The bartender, her loose red braids over her shoulder turns to him, another clone.

  • She smiles gently, the reaches under the counter and pulls out a small, beautifully crafted pistol.

  • He turns to leave in a panic, but before he can move, a shot rings out.

  • He falls as the bullet tears his heart apart.

  • INT. SEAN'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

  • The small room seems packed as several detectives comb through Sean's belongings.

  • Red and blue lights flash through the bedroom window, street lights illuminating the squad cars parked on the road and in the driveway of the small house.

  • DETECTIVE BYRONS stands over the bed, staring down at Sean's lifeless body. It is untouched by violence, except for a tiny trickle of blood drying on his chin.

  • The detective finishes inspecting the body, shaking his head.

  • BYRONS
  • Huh!

  • He slowly covers Sean's body with the blanket, taking one last look at the body.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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