Monday, February 18, 2008

48. Bathroom Goddess - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • INT. PUBLIC BATHROOM - NIGHT

  • The door to the bathroom swings open and ANYA marches into the room, her mop bucket a battering ram on wheels.

  • She is a short, sturdy woman, with a maternal face, and hands toughened by years of hard work.

  • She surveys the bathroom, one of the more boring, uninviting bathrooms in the building.

  • She moves swiftly, cleaning the sinks.

  • She enters the stalls, only her thick legs visible beneath the ugly tan dividers, as she scrubs and sprays.

  • She leaves one stall, standing back to inspect her work for a moment, then enters the next.

  • Anya lives the middle stall and enters the last one, and stops short, the door swinging open behind her.

  • In front of her, on the toilet tank is a simple white vase holding a long-stemmed rose.

  • A note dangles from its stem, and it reads: An offering to the bathroom Goddess - thanks for keeping our bathroom so clean.

  • She allows herself a small smile, tucks the rose in one of her apron pockets, then slams the door behind her and begins scrubbing.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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