- FADE IN:
- INT. A HOLD IN THE MARIA DRAKE - DUSK
- Small bare FEET walk carefully along the wooden planks of the dark hold, carefully avoiding chains on the filthy floor.
- The feet belong to a SMALL GIRL in a dirty shift, slowly weaving her way between the bodies packed into the ship's belly, as it groans its way along the middle passage.
- As she walks, she sings softly in an ancient language, the haunting melody causing the men and women she moves between to weep and reach for her.
- INT. THE DECK OF THE MARIA DRAKE - DUSK
- CAPTAIN WILLIAM MACEY paces the deck, in small agitated steps.
- ROBERT ATWOOD, his first mate walks behind him.
- ROBERT ATWOOD
- Sir, it's fine sir, she's harming no one. And some of the men find her voice comforting.
- CAPTAIN WILLIAM MACEY
- I won't have it, there's something dark about those words; good Christian men have no need of heathen...
- ROBERT ATWOOD
- Sir, please, she's just a child.
- A soft voice surprises them, and they spin. The girl stands on the deck, staring at the captain.
- His mouth opens and he searches for words, fear playing in his eyes.
- She begins to sing to him, walking slowly towards him.
- His eyes and shoulders relax as she walks nearer.
- The captain can't take his eyes off of her, the words enchanting him.
- His first mate slips closer.
- ROBERT ATWOOD
- See sir, there's nothing wrong.
- The spell breaks, and William Macey's eyes flash around the deck. His men stand still, entranced.
- He pulls a large pistol from his belt and carefully takes aim, then fires.
- The ball hits the girl in the chest, tearing words from her lips.
- She falls to the deck.
- Macey points at a sailor.
- CAPTAIN WILLIAM MACEY
- Overboard.
- He turns away, walking in longer strides.
- The first mate stares as the girl's body is lifted and thrown into the Atlantic.
- There is a shriek from deep in the boat, then voices from the holds collectively rise in ululating cries.
- The first mate clutches the deck, and watches as the little body disappears into the dark.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Tuesday, February 19, 2008
50. Yearning Ears - Leslie
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