- FADE IN:
- EXT. CITY STREETS - NIGHT
- AMBER skips from puddle to puddle as rain pounds on her head. Street lamp light gives the puddles a glossy, orange surface.
- MARTY runs behind her kicking the puddles and watching fallen water join the rain for a brief moment.
- Amber trips to a stop, pointing wordlessly at the street in front of her.
- It seems to stretch to stretch on forever.
- An inky fluid is rushing down the street, far away from them, but gaining ground, like flood waters fighting to find an escape.
- They turn, trying to run, but can't seem to move fast enough.
- Amber jumps, swan-diving into one of the puddles and sinks beneath the surface as the rain lifts the water above the tops of cars within an instant.
- Marty swims next to her, and they gain speed.
- Amber glances back and sees that the darkness is absorbing all the rain water.
- Marty treads water in terror as it begins to drain towards the darkness.
- Amber stands, in the now ankle-deep water and runs.
- Susan is on a cell-phone call. She smiles at Melissa, who walks by with two cups of coffee.
- Marty turns around and inhales sharply, darkness getting sucked into his lungs. He cocks his head as he realizes what he's done.
- He kneels and begins drinking the darkness as it begins to lap around it.
- Amber sees what he is doing and joins him.
- They drink desperately, shocked that when they look up the darkness is gone.
- Amber stands and grabs Marty's hand.
- He grins at her.
- A fist of darkness plunges out of Amber's chest, and then out of Marty's.
- They try to scream, but their voices are gone. Tendrils reaching around them until they is completely covered.
- The darkness pours from them, traveling down the street, leaving their shells, darkened, in the middle of the road.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Friday, February 15, 2008
45. Rain Swimmers - Leslie
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