Tuesday, February 12, 2008

43. Her Own Stream - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. JAPANESE GARDEN - DAY

  • Isabella opens her eyes and looks around, enjoying the scent of bright cherry blossoms and damp grass.

  • The garden around her is full of color, dark red gazebos, and ornate bridges, delicate in their intricacy.

  • She smiles sleepily and closes her eyes.

  • She floats on the stream that divides the garden, still for a moment, then pulled by the steady flow of water.

  • Her dark hair twists and trails behind her and her soaked dress spreads around her on the surface of the water.

  • Footsteps pound the cement paths that twist through the path and a security guard appears from behind thick foliage.

  • OFFICER THOMAS
  • Lady, hey lady...you can't swim in the stream lady.

  • Isabella murmurs, asleep.

  • ISABELLA
  • You can't touch me here..safe.

  • OFFICER THOMAS
  • Lady...what's your name ma'am? Look, I have to ask you to leave the premises.

  • The stream picks up speed, pulling her along it's curves away from him.

  • Officer Thomas throws up his hands and watches her float gently through the garden.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


1 comment:

Anonymous said...

oblivion and rebellion.
i really like this one.