Tuesday, July 29, 2008

211. Chill - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. BUS - DAY

  • JAMES REINER sits impatiently on the bus.

  • He holds an iPhone to his ear.

  • JAMES
  • Yes, yes...the car broke down, so I have to take the bus and it's going nowhere fast.

  • The bus pulls into another street-side stop.

  • JAMES
  • Oh for goodness sakes! How many stops does this bus have? Seriously. Ok, Ok, I'll see you at work.

  • He hangs up and puts the phone away, glaring out the window past the heads of HISPANIC MAIDS.

  • The bus turns into GRIFFITH PARK and begins to chug slowly up the incline as it head to Burbank.

  • JANE, a homeless woman, leans towards him.

  • James cringes and looks away.

  • JANE
  • Sir, excuse me, sir?

  • James turns reluctantly to her.

  • JANE
  • You're going to miss all the great little things about life racing around in a rush like this. Look outside! Look at how beautiful the park is this morning. But you're going to miss all that...you should seriously reconsider all the rushing and chill.

  • She leans back in her seat and closes her eyes.

  • James looks at her then looks out the bus window.

  • A gentle mist rises the ground.

  • JOGGERS run through the beautiful summer greenery.

  • James looks back over at Jane who is lost behind her closed eyelids.

  • He looks at the park and then at the the wire hanging across the window.

  • He grabs the wire, tugs it, and the "stop" signal lights up.

  • The bus pulls over at the next stop and James hops off.

  • The air is fresh and he inhales deeply, the stress draining from his face.

  • He looks around and then sees the path.

  • He walks over and awkwardly hops the fence, briefcase in hand.

  • JOGGERS stare at the site of a man in an expensive suit and even more expensive shoes ambling towards them on a dirt path.

  • Some turn around to look again as they pass him.

  • He throws back his head and laughs, then walks on.

  • INT. BUSINESS OFFICE LOBBY - DAY

  • James bursts into the lobby, suit-rumpled and sweaty.

  • LINDA, the receptionist, looks at him with mild shock.

  • LINDA
  • Wow, so you weren't kidding about the bus trip.

  • He grins at her and chuckles.

  • JAMES
  • You have no idea.

  • He walks into the elevator and the doors close.

  • Linda stares at the elevator then shakes her head.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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