- FADE IN:
- INT. BUS - DAY
- JAMES REINER sits impatiently on the bus.
- He holds an iPhone to his ear.
- JAMES
- Yes, yes...the car broke down, so I have to take the bus and it's going nowhere fast.
- The bus pulls into another street-side stop.
- JAMES
- Oh for goodness sakes! How many stops does this bus have? Seriously. Ok, Ok, I'll see you at work.
- He hangs up and puts the phone away, glaring out the window past the heads of HISPANIC MAIDS.
- The bus turns into GRIFFITH PARK and begins to chug slowly up the incline as it head to Burbank.
- JANE, a homeless woman, leans towards him.
- James cringes and looks away.
- JANE
- Sir, excuse me, sir?
- James turns reluctantly to her.
- JANE
- You're going to miss all the great little things about life racing around in a rush like this. Look outside! Look at how beautiful the park is this morning. But you're going to miss all that...you should seriously reconsider all the rushing and chill.
- She leans back in her seat and closes her eyes.
- James looks at her then looks out the bus window.
- A gentle mist rises the ground.
- JOGGERS run through the beautiful summer greenery.
- James looks back over at Jane who is lost behind her closed eyelids.
- He looks at the park and then at the the wire hanging across the window.
- He grabs the wire, tugs it, and the "stop" signal lights up.
- The bus pulls over at the next stop and James hops off.
- The air is fresh and he inhales deeply, the stress draining from his face.
- He looks around and then sees the path.
- He walks over and awkwardly hops the fence, briefcase in hand.
- JOGGERS stare at the site of a man in an expensive suit and even more expensive shoes ambling towards them on a dirt path.
- Some turn around to look again as they pass him.
- He throws back his head and laughs, then walks on.
- INT. BUSINESS OFFICE LOBBY - DAY
- James bursts into the lobby, suit-rumpled and sweaty.
- LINDA, the receptionist, looks at him with mild shock.
- LINDA
- Wow, so you weren't kidding about the bus trip.
- He grins at her and chuckles.
- JAMES
- You have no idea.
- He walks into the elevator and the doors close.
- Linda stares at the elevator then shakes her head.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Tuesday, July 29, 2008
211. Chill - Leslie
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