- FADE IN:
- EXT. BEACH - NIGHT
- DENNIS sits with ANDREW, ERIC, MARK, ELLEN, SUSAN, and TONY around a small bonfire on the beach.
- He sits on the edge of the group looking a bit lost.
- ANDREW
- So she was completely feeling me up and I just felt...
- ELLEN
- Oh please, don't tell me you felt used. Ha! You were loving it.
- ANDREW
- Hey, that's not fair, talk about a double standard. I did love it.
- The group laughs.
- Dennis gets up and walks quietly away, towards the water, brushing sand off of his pants.
- ERIC
- Dude, you always have these crazy experiences.
- SUSAN
- Tell me about it...I'm fairly sure you spend most of your time just looking for random people who will give you good stories to tell.
- The conversation fades as Dennis gets close to the water.
- He begins walking parallel to the water, looking at the beach houses scattered across the shore line, their warm lights making the area feel warm and inviting.
- The full moon scatters tiny light-gems across the surface of the water.
- Dennis walks on, carefully avoiding the tide as it laps in.
- He hears a splashing sound and turns out to the ocean.
- There is nothing at first, then sunlight glints off of hair, a face, a person in the water and he stops to stare.
- A YOUNG WOMAN walks waist-deep in the water, hair trailing down her back, white dress floating up in the water.
- He walks closer, forgetting about the tide, then jerking back as it laps his sandals.
- The woman walks, head down, arms at her sides.
- She pulls her hands out of the water and lighting sparks around them.
- Dennis' jaw drops and he tries to move into shadow while watching her.
- A hand claps onto his shoulder.
- He whirls around to find MARGARET, an old woman in jeans and a sturdy cane, behind him.
- MARGARET
- Shh.
- DENNIS
- What is she?
- MARGARET
- A star.
- DENNIS
- Excuse me?
- MARGARET
- Shhh! You're making enough noise to wake a stone Buddha.
- DENNIS
- I think that's a bit of an exaggeration.
- MARGARET
- Shh!
- DENNIS
- What's this about movie stars?
- MARGARET
- I never said anything about movie stars. I said star. She fell. I think she's from Outer Ring.
- DENNIS
- Wait...you lost me at fell. A star star?
- Margaret nods.
- MARGARET
- She's my third. I saw my first when I was seven, my second when I was 43. That's when I started tracking them.
- DENNIS
- Outer ring?
- MARGARET
- Of our galaxy.
- Dennis begins walking towards the woman.
- MARGARET
- Wait, I wouldn't do that.
- Dennis keeps walking, into the surf.
- The young woman watches the lighting in her hands a lost look on her face.
- Dennis walks deeper into the water.
- MARGARET
- Stop!
- He reaches out and touches the star's shoulder, and his hand goes right through.
- She turns, eyes wide and sees him.
- Her eyes soften, and a molten tear drips down her face.
- She reaches back to him and touches his face.
- His eyes go wide and his eyes fill with light, becoming pure silver.
- She jerks her hand back and he falls into the water.
- Margaret rushes to him, splashing around with her cane and pulls him to safety.
- He blinks opening his eyes and stares down the beach as the star looks at him, then turns, eyes full of sadness, and continues walking through the shallow water.
- Margaret shakes her head as Dennis stares after the star.
- MARGARET
- Well know, if that isn't the saddest thing I've ever seen.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Friday, July 18, 2008
200. Whispers of the Divine - Leslie
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