Friday, July 25, 2008

207. Strong Women - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY - DAY

  • ARTHUR JONES stands, stranded by the side of the road, staring at his blown tire with frustration.

  • His car, a small Honda, is pristine other than the obvious.

  • The spare and assorted lie on the road next to him.

  • Cars whizz past, ignoring the 70 year old man standing helpless on the shoulder.

  • A dented Honda Accord slows behind him and comes to a stop.

  • ANN LEE steps out of the car, dressed in a short, off-white dress and jeans.

  • She walks towards Arthur.

  • ANN
  • Need any help?

  • ARTHUR
  • I could. Blew a tire and to be honest, I'm completely clueless about how to change one of these. Not sure how I made it this far in life without learning that, but here we are.

  • ANN
  • Ok, let's see. Well, you got the spare out, that's a start...and, OK, hand me the jack and iron? Those right there.

  • Ann points at the tools and he brings them to her.

  • ANN
  • Ok, you're in park right? Emergency break?

  • Arthur nods.

  • ANN
  • Cool. Watch carefully.

  • She grins and Arthur chuckles.

  • She grabs the tire iron from him and starts loosening the lugs, gritting her teeth as she fights with each of the tightly screwed lugs.

  • She gets them loose, then slides the jack under the car.

  • ANN
  • See these? These are jacking points, this is the only place you want to use this thing. No accounting for what will happen otherwise.

  • She makes sure it's firmly in place, then begins rotating the hand crank.

  • The jack slowly rises and the car creaks as it is forced up.

  • ANN
  • Mind if I ask a personal question?

  • ARTHUR
  • Please do?

  • ANN
  • You don't seem that embarrassed that I'm changing this tire for you. I mean...

  • ARTHUR
  • Well, I'm certainly embarrassed that I haven't learned how to do this; and I've had enough time to learn; but if you're referring to the fact that you're a woman, there's no reason for me to be ashamed about that.

  • ANN
  • That's a unique perspective.

  • ARTHUR
  • True, but it shouldn't be.

  • Ann finishes jacking up the car and starts removing the lugs.

  • ARTHUR
  • A truly strong man is one who respects the strength and independence of women.

  • Ann pops the flat off and begins attaching the spare.

  • ANN
  • I don't think I've ever heard that before.

  • ARTHUR
  • And that's a shame.

  • The stand in silence as she lowers the tire.

  • ANN
  • Why do you respect strong women?

  • ARTHUR
  • Because my father didn't. Young lady, if a man doesn't treasure your obvious power and wisdom, he isn't worthy of you. If he doesn't understand that respecting your strength doesn't diminish his own, well, then...pfft!

  • Ann smiles at him.

  • ANN
  • All done.

  • ARTHUR
  • Thank you very much. I don't even know your name.

  • ANN
  • Ann.

  • ARTHUR
  • Well Ann, thank you for attempting to teach this old man a new trick.

  • ANN
  • Thank you, Mr...

  • ARTHUR
  • Arthur, just call me Arthur.

  • ANN
  • Mr. Arthur, thank you.

  • They shake hands and he bows slightly.

  • She turns and walks to her car, waves at him, then gets in and drives away.

  • He returns the tools to the trunk, gets into his car, starts the engine and drives onto the highway; slowly disappearing into a mirage.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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