Sunday, April 6, 2008

97. Slip - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. SUBWAY CAR - NIGHT

  • MARK sits on the subway, strumming his guitar.

  • It's late and he's alone with his music.

  • He plays loudly, over the dull screaming of the eternally tortured subway car.

  • The train pulls into a station, the doors open and close, and the train screeches away.

  • Mark keeps playing, lost in his music.

  • The sound of soft footsteps startles him and he looks up.

  • ANDI has walked into the train car, and leans again one of the poles, listening to his music.

  • Mark smiles shyly and keeps strumming.

  • Andi listens closer, then starts singing.

  • Mark starts, but continues to play, his fingers plucking intricate notes.

  • Andi sings louder, over the subway rumble.

  • The train passes station after station as they play.

  • Finally, the train pulls into a station, and Andi lets go of the poll, and slips out the train doors.

  • MARK
  • Hey, wait! Wait!

  • The doors slam shut, and Andi turns around.

  • She places her palm against the glass of the window, and looks at him for a long moment, then lets go as the train begins to move.

  • MARK
  • C'mon!

  • She watches as the train begins to speed up, then gives him a last mysterious smile and disappears.

  • Mark sits down, shaking his head.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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