Wednesday, April 23, 2008

114. All Wet - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • INT. COLLEGE APARTMENT - DAY

  • LAUREN sits on her couch, a trash can in front of her with a box of tissues on one side, a large lighter on the other side, and a pile of letters, poems, and pictures on the floor.

  • She picks up the first letter and rotates it in her hands.

  • She unfolds it, starts to read it, then shakes her head and grabs the lighter.

  • She lights the letter and tosses it into the trash can.

  • Grabbing letters and poems, she goes faster and faster.

  • Smoke begins to rise from the trash can and swirl dangerously around the fire alarm.

  • She slows as she reaches the first picture, and stares for a long moment. She stands close to JORDAN in the picture; he's looking away, laughing, she's looking at him.

  • She inhales, and lights the picture and then adds more pictures to the pyre.

  • She grabs the last picture and begins to light it as the smoke washes closer and closer to the alarm.

  • Lauren hears laughter and looks up.

  • Jordan is walking past, hair messy, eyes on fire as he jokes with a friend.

  • She stares dumbly for a moment, then reaches into the smoke, grabbing for the last picture.

  • She rescues a scrap of it, and holds it against her chest, Jordan's laughing eyes seeming to survey the apartment from the picture.

  • The alarm screams and the apartment sprinkler goes off.

  • Jordan and his friends turn, looking through the window.

  • Lauren sits, drenched, clutching the picture, staring silently back.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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