Saturday, October 18, 2008

292. In Which Jase Courts a Mysterious Girl - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. BANK - DAY

  • JASE stands in line waiting for the next available teller at the bank.

  • It's a typical branch office, with a large, glass-off room containing the tellers and semi-private desks scattered around the rest of the space with bankers waiting patiently for customers.

  • Jase spots ANIKA who sits at a desk behind the glass, a pair of earbuds sticking out of her ears.

  • Her face draws him in, a face that seems more suited on a distant beach, with its freckled and subtle, exotic features.

  • She smiles in his direction and he waves back, but she turns away.

  • INT. BANK - DAY

  • Several weeks later, Jase is back at the bank and Anika is again sitting at her desk.

  • Jase tries to get her attention, looking at her and giving small wave, but she does not react.

  • BOBBY, who sits at a desk near Anika, notices Jase and watches, amused.

  • A TELLER waves him to her station and he hands her a check, nodding, but distracted by Anika.

  • INT. BANK - LATE AFTERNOON

  • Jase is at the bank again.

  • This time he is ready with a note.

  • It reads "I think you're beautiful - would you care to join me for some coffee after work?"

  • He looks around and holds it up quickly hoping she'll see, then tucks it back into his pocket, trying to avoid attention.

  • After a long moment, a TELLER waves him up to his station.

  • He hand the teller a check, and as the teller processes it, Jase tries to attract Anika's attention while pressing the note, hidden in his palm, against the glass.

  • Bobby sees the note and watches Jase try to get Anika's attention.

  • He gets up from his seat and slips out of the room, exiting through the thick glass security doors.

  • He comes up behind Jase and taps him on the shoulder.

  • Jase jumps, looking at Bobby guiltily.

  • Bobby leans over and whispers into his ear.

  • Jase freezes, then not even stopping to take the money he has cashed, he rushes from the bank.

  • Customers watch him, surprised.

  • Bobby stares after him, then shakes his head and heads back to his desk.

  • INT. BANK - MOMENTS LATER

  • Jase rushes bank into the bank a few minutes later and ignoring the other customer's stares, waves at Bobby.

  • Security approaches and Bobby waves them off, then approaches Jase.

  • Jase hands him the note and Bobby inspects it, then breaks out in a grin.

  • Below Jase's handwriting are crude braille marks punched into the paper.

  • He heads back into the glass enclosure and hands the note to Anika.

  • She feels it then turns quizzically in Bobby's direction.

  • He leans to her and explains.

  • She asks him a question and then hearing the answer, turns in Jase's direction.

  • Jase waits, holding his breath.

  • She cocks her head considering, teasing, then smiles and nods her head.

  • She holds up her hand, displaying five fingers.

  • Jase smiles widely, not able to help himself and nods.

  • Bobby speaks to her and she nods back.

  • Jase leaves the bank and Anika smiles happily into space.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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