- FADE IN:
- INT. BANK - DAY
- JASE stands in line waiting for the next available teller at the bank.
- It's a typical branch office, with a large, glass-off room containing the tellers and semi-private desks scattered around the rest of the space with bankers waiting patiently for customers.
- Jase spots ANIKA who sits at a desk behind the glass, a pair of earbuds sticking out of her ears.
- Her face draws him in, a face that seems more suited on a distant beach, with its freckled and subtle, exotic features.
- She smiles in his direction and he waves back, but she turns away.
- INT. BANK - DAY
- Several weeks later, Jase is back at the bank and Anika is again sitting at her desk.
- Jase tries to get her attention, looking at her and giving small wave, but she does not react.
- BOBBY, who sits at a desk near Anika, notices Jase and watches, amused.
- A TELLER waves him to her station and he hands her a check, nodding, but distracted by Anika.
- INT. BANK - LATE AFTERNOON
- Jase is at the bank again.
- This time he is ready with a note.
- It reads "I think you're beautiful - would you care to join me for some coffee after work?"
- He looks around and holds it up quickly hoping she'll see, then tucks it back into his pocket, trying to avoid attention.
- After a long moment, a TELLER waves him up to his station.
- He hand the teller a check, and as the teller processes it, Jase tries to attract Anika's attention while pressing the note, hidden in his palm, against the glass.
- Bobby sees the note and watches Jase try to get Anika's attention.
- He gets up from his seat and slips out of the room, exiting through the thick glass security doors.
- He comes up behind Jase and taps him on the shoulder.
- Jase jumps, looking at Bobby guiltily.
- Bobby leans over and whispers into his ear.
- Jase freezes, then not even stopping to take the money he has cashed, he rushes from the bank.
- Customers watch him, surprised.
- Bobby stares after him, then shakes his head and heads back to his desk.
- INT. BANK - MOMENTS LATER
- Jase rushes bank into the bank a few minutes later and ignoring the other customer's stares, waves at Bobby.
- Security approaches and Bobby waves them off, then approaches Jase.
- Jase hands him the note and Bobby inspects it, then breaks out in a grin.
- Below Jase's handwriting are crude braille marks punched into the paper.
- He heads back into the glass enclosure and hands the note to Anika.
- She feels it then turns quizzically in Bobby's direction.
- He leans to her and explains.
- She asks him a question and then hearing the answer, turns in Jase's direction.
- Jase waits, holding his breath.
- She cocks her head considering, teasing, then smiles and nods her head.
- She holds up her hand, displaying five fingers.
- Jase smiles widely, not able to help himself and nods.
- Bobby speaks to her and she nods back.
- Jase leaves the bank and Anika smiles happily into space.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Saturday, October 18, 2008
292. In Which Jase Courts a Mysterious Girl - Leslie
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