Friday, August 29, 2008

242. Unspoken - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. MAINE BEACH - NIGHT

  • JACKIE and RIC sit by the embers of a dying fire on the sand.

  • Black waves lap onto the sand, the silver of moonlight tangled within their dark mass.

  • The light plays off of the couple's faces.

  • Jackie sits cross legged, arms perched on her knees.

  • Ric has his head on her shoulder and they watch the embers.

  • Jackie's face is strong with delicate features, high cheekbones and an angular face.

  • She wears a tank top, which reveals the spirals and bands tattooed around her arms and spilling onto her chest.

  • Her dark loose pants ripple in the light breeze.

  • Rik has short cropped hair and an earring in his left lobe.

  • He wears a tight-fitting t-shirt and jeans, his bare feet partly buried in the sand.

  • He takes his head off her shoulder and begins slowly, gently tracing her tattoos with his forefinger.

  • He stops and they look at each other; she smiles.

  • He follows the spirals up and down, feeling her smooth skin.

  • She leans over to kiss him and suddenly he flickers and disappears.

  • She lets out a gasp and looks around.

  • She stands, spinning backwards and forwards looking for him.

  • INT. LAB 31 - DAY

  • Jackie's body lies strapped to a hospital bed, wires extending from her body into a bank of computers.

  • Bags full of fluid surround the bed, quietly pumping her full of the nutrients she needs.

  • DR. O'MARTIN watches a bank of paper-thin monitors along the walls.

  • The monitors show Jackie racing around the sand, yelling soundlessly for Rik.

  • His colleague DR. MARTINEZ steps into the room, with a guest, MR. HAYDEN.

  • Mr. Hayden inspects the monitors.

  • DR. MARTINEZ
  • As you can see, we can see what our subject is seeing in the virtual world we've crafted for her.

  • MR. HAYDEN
  • Excellent. Dr. O'Martin, good to meet you.

  • O'Martin nods.

  • MR. HAYDEN
  • And you've run her through the narrative how many times?

  • DR. MARTINEZ
  • This is her 20th time, sir.

  • MR. HAYDEN
  • She doesn't remember a thing?

  • DR. O'MARTIN
  • We do a thorough mind wipe after every session.

  • MR. HAYDEN
  • And what about...?

  • DR. MARTINEZ
  • She's held out the longest of our subjects, but she should lose her mind completely in the next several sessions.

  • MR. HAYDEN
  • Excellent, excellent.

  • DR. MARTINEZ
  • We'll let you know as soon as she's complete.

  • DR. O'MARTIN
  • You'll be able to mold her however you wish. You can have her do anything once we finish our process. We aim to provide you with a quality product.

  • MR. HAYDEN
  • She'll never remember?

  • DR. MARTINEZ
  • She'll have some fight left, but it'll be instinctual...we can wipe that as well?

  • MR. HAYDEN
  • No, no, it's fine. I like a little spunk.

  • DR. MARTINEZ
  • Good, well let me show you out to the receptionist and she'll get the rest of your information for payment.

  • She guides Mr. Hayden from the room.

  • Dr. O'Martin watches Jackie run around a little longer, then touches a full buttons on the screens.

  • Jackie's body twitches.

  • EXT. MAINE BEACH - NIGHT

  • JACKIE and RIC sit by the embers of a dying fire on the sand.

  • Ric has his head on her shoulder and they watch the embers.

  • He takes his head off her shoulder and begins slowly, gently tracing her tattoos with his forefinger.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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