Wednesday, August 13, 2008

226. The Butterfly Charmer - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. BUTCHER'S ALLEY, NEW ARIES - DAY

  • The Alley is dark and damp and the smoky sky above only hints at the existence of a sun.

  • A large shadow is cast over the entrance of the alley and soft footsteps slowly approach, then a giggle.

  • RIEKA, a small 7-year-old girl skips across the dirty ground, her dress whirling around her.

  • She sings quietly to herself.

  • Rieka stops short, spotting a grapefruit-sized glass ball lying under a heap of trash.

  • She pulls it out and brushes it off.

  • She stands up and holds it to her chest and it begins to glow.

  • Her eyes grow wider and she holds it away from herself as it begins to glow a rich orange.

  • There is a popping sound sounds, a fizzling, and then a glowing, pale yellow butterfly flickers into existence above her.

  • She doesn't notice and and walks to the edge of the alley, then stops, hearing the soft flapping.

  • She turns around and puts her hand to her mouth, delighted.

  • The butterfly circles the orb and then another and another glimmer into existence.

  • EXT. MERCHANT'S BLVD, NEW ARIES - DAY

  • Rieka walks out onto the main street, her amber orb and the small swarm of yellow butterflies that continues multiplying around her adding a patch of warmth to the dusty blue of the city.

  • She skips along and the butterflies trail her, a ribbon of gold weaving in and out of tired pedestrians who pause for a moment to stare at the odd sight.

  • Ahead of her, a small, ramshackle shack comes into view.

  • EXT. RIEKA'S HOUSE - DAY

  • She stops in front of it.

  • RIEKA
  • Mommy, mommy.

  • There is silence.

  • RIEKA
  • Mommy!

  • MOTHER
  • Just a minute Rieka.

  • RIEKA
  • Quick Mommy!

  • Her MOTHER opens the door, wiping her hands on a stained apron, lines weighing down her tired face.

  • She sees the butterflies and her eyes go soft.

  • She stands on the stoop of the shack, awed.

  • The orb flickers and Mother holds her breath.

  • .It flickers again, then dies.

  • The butterflies buzz, then begin disappearing.

  • Rieka shakes it, then looks at her mother forlornly.

  • Her mother swoops down from the stairs and pulls her close.

  • They walk back to the house, the door squeaking closed behind them.

  • There is a soft buzzing sound and a single butterfly appear, hovering near the entrance.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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