- FADE IN:
- INT. HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
- A PAIR OF WHITE SOCKS lies neatly on the wooden floor of the hotel room.
- Further up, BALLED UP BLACK SOCKS hit the floor by the bed skirt.
- The sound of water lapping at sand quietly fills the room.
- Further along the bed skirt TWO PAIRS OF SHOES, a pair of white ballet shoes with delicate stitching and tiny white roses and spit-shined black dress shoes, rest side by side.
- JEREMY sits cross-legged on the bed, his tux jacket draped neatly across a chair, his bow tie loose around his neck.
- ALLISON sits across from him, her wedding dress puff out around her.
- They sit, looking at each other, Allison with a goofy grin growing across her face, Jeremy serious.
- A smile pinches at his lips.
- JEREMY
- So, you glad we waited?
- ALLISON
- You think it'll be awkward?
- JEREMY
- Oh, it'll be incredibly awkward.
- ALLISON
- Shame...I was just in this for your body and your unbelievable sexual prowess.
- JEREMY
- It's true, I led you on.
- ALLISON
- I knew it! I'll be leaving now. Don't you dare call me.
- She turns, as if to go and they both burst out laughing.
- ALLISON
- Yeah, I am. I wasn't sure at first...you and your bright ideas. But I'm glad we stuck it out. This may not be the best ever, but it'll be special, unique. Maybe I should stop using shortbus synonyms.
- JEREMY
- Maybe. Thanks for respecting my boundaries.
- ALLISON
- You need to be shutting up right about now...there are boundaries I'm ready to start disrespecting.
- JEREMY
- Turn around.
- Allison scoots around on the bed.
- ALLISON
- I'm kind of giddy.
- JEREMY
- As long as you're more giddy when we're doing the same thing 90 years from now.
- ALLISON
- Oh, I like how you think.
- JEREMY
- Mmm, so it wasn't just for my body...
- ALLISON
- Darling...
- JEREMY
- I didn't actually believe I'd find you.
- She leans back at puts her head on his shoulder and he begins unlacing the corset top of her wedding dress.
- She reaches behind herself and finds his hands, then pulls his arms around her stomach.
- And they sit, two lovers at the edge of diving.
- EXT. HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
- The hotel is modeled like a Swiss chalet, perched high in the Rockies.
- Allison and Jeremy are visible through their window as he keep an arm around her and gently continues to unlace her.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Sunday, August 17, 2008
230. Little White Shoes - Leslie
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