Thursday, May 29, 2008

150. Brevity - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. EMPTY ROOM - DAY

  • AISHA sits in a room that is bare with the exception of a baby grand piano, a purple orchid sitting on the piano, and small tea lights scattered around the room.

  • A small window allows sunlight to leak into the room.

  • A single door, thick with locks is behind her.

  • Aisha plays, her eye closed, as a plaintive melody fills the room.

  • The sound of keys being inserted into the locks breaks the beauty of the music, but she never stirs.

  • A MAN in an immaculately pressed suit enters the room, his well-polished shoes reflecting the candles.

  • He surveys the room, then begins to meticulously extinguish each of the candles.

  • As the candles die, Aisha slows down.

  • She struggles to move her hands as more candles die.

  • She slumps, still struggling to play.

  • The man blows out the last candle and peers over at Aisha.

  • She is still playing, a single finger pressing out the notes.

  • He frowns and walks to the piano.

  • He studies her, then turns to the orchid.

  • He gently runs his finger up its delicate stem, caressing it.

  • In a seamless movement, he snaps the orchid away from the stem, crushing the flower in his hand.

  • Aisha's head hits the keys and she gasps once, then freezes.

  • The man surveys the room, then walks briskly to the door and closes it.

  • The sound of his keys locking the door sound through the room.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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