- FADE IN:
- INT. CCTV MONITORING STATION - EVENING
- JON watches a bank of monitors that cover a whole range of human activity.
- He watches as people walk along streets, huddle in corners to converse, fight, and make-out.
- He slouches in his chair, watching everything closely.
- A WOMAN walks onto one of the bottom screens and he notices right away sitting up straight.
- He flips an array of buttons, and begins following her journey down the sidewalk.
- She walks at comfortable pace.
- He watches for a moment, then slowly pulls open a drawer full of delicate, colored paper.
- Origami butterflies spill out, and he carefully replaces them at the back of the drawer.
- He pulls a sheet of pale orange paper out, and begins folding, as he watches the woman's journey.
- TODD (O.S.)
- Jon!
- Jon spins around in his chair, clutching the paper.
- TODD stands behind him grinning.
- TODD
- What's up?
- JON
- Just her.
- TODD
- You're a sick puppy you know? You need to quit staring at her and just find her and give her a bag full of those butterflies. And FYI, don't mention you've been stalking her for the last 6 months. And what's with the butterflies anyway?
- JON
- She likes them.
- TODD
- How do you know that? No, wait, on second thought, I really don't want to know.
- Jon shushes him with a wave and turns back to the monitor.
- She is on a higher screen now and has stopped outside a store front and is chatting animatedly with the shop owner.
- Her skirt flows around her, barely touching the sidewalk.
- She kisses the shop owner on both cheeks, thanking him for the parcel she holds, then continues, her skirt flowing around her.
- She walks off screen, and Jon slouches back into his chair.
- TODD
- Out of range?
- Jon nods.
- Todd shakes his head and slips away murmuring.
- TODD
- Every flipping night.
- Jon places a now finished butterfly in the drawer and closes it.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Sunday, May 4, 2008
125. Closed Circuit - Leslie
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