- FADE IN:
- INT. STEVEN'S KITCHEN - DAY
- Steven paces the tile, tapping his fingers against the countertops.
- He looks in the refrigerator, it's completely empty.
- The house is bare, all his belongings packed away.
- A moving guy walks briskly past with the last of Steven's belongings.
- The door slams, and the truck moves away.
- Steven takes a deep breath, and paces some more.
- He opens the refrigerator again.
- STEVEN
- Stop, stop.
- He turns away from the fridge door and digs into his pocket.
- After a bit of fumbling, he pulls his cell phone out and flips it open.
- He places it to his ear.
- The faint sound of ringing escapes past his ear and echoes softly in the empty room.
- AUTOMATED VOICEMAIL
- I'm sorry, "Erin White" is not available at this time, press one to send a numeric page or wait until the tone to leave a message.
- STEVEN
- Hey Erin, I'm a few hours away from catching my flight. I'm feeling those lonely, moving jitters. Like I haven't been able to see everyone, or I'm forgetting something. I'd hoped you'd pick up. I just need a few minutes with you. I'm sorry for being an idiot these last few years, and it's probably too late to do anything about that right now, but I just want to see you. I think I missed out on the best thing in my life because I was scared you weren't exactly right. I'm probably running out of time. Meet me at the usual...I'll be there until three.
- EXT. ARCHER'S FIELD - DAY
- Steven paces the newly mowed field, around and around a copse of trees at the far edge. The large field curves across the hills.
- He looks at his watch, it's 2:45.
- He shakes his head, and hikes back to his car.
- He hesitates as he reaches the car, looking at the road, waiting.
- He sighs then gets in, and drives slowly back onto the road.
- The field sits empty, the trees swaying in the warm breeze as he begins to leave.
- A car pulls onto the field, coming from the opposite direction.
- The driver's side door flies open, and ERIN tumbles out in jeans and flip flops.
- She races after Steven's car.
- ERIN
- Steven, Steven!
- He never looks back, driving on.
- She slows, running out of energy and breath.
- Erin looks at her watch and her face twists. 2:55.
- She walks across the field.
- She sits down in the expanse of trees against a broad trunk and buries her head in her hands.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Saturday, May 17, 2008
138. Perfect Timing - Leslie
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