Monday, May 12, 2008

133. Threes - Leslie





  • FADE IN:

  • INT. GYM - DAY

  • ERIK and JORDAN stand by a set of free weights by the gym window.

  • Erik slides onto a nearby bench and begins doing a set of curls, head cocked as he stares admiringly at his biceps.

  • Jordan is glued to the window watching the ebb and flow of pedestrians.

  • JORDAN
  • I need a woman.

  • ERIK
  • I'll get right on that.

  • JORDAN
  • I'm serious. But she's gotta be a ten...I mean, I might settle for a nine, but she's gotta make up for that missing point somehow.

  • He leers at Erik.

  • ERIK
  • So what constitutes a ten in your mind?

  • ALANNA, who is working out nearby, tilts her head to listen closer.

  • Jordan holds up his hand.

  • JORDAN
  • One, she's got to...you know what? Better I just show you.

  • Erik finishes his set and comes to the window.

  • He points to a woman.

  • JORDAN
  • Ehhh, five.

  • ERIK
  • How about that one there?

  • JORDAN
  • Ooh, nice, could be an eight but she walks all wrong. Six.

  • A woman walks past with a seductive gait.

  • ERIK
  • There's a seven.

  • JORDAN
  • Hmm, yeah, seven.

  • ERIK
  • Ok, I see what you're going for. Nice taste.

  • JORDAN
  • Thanks.

  • Alanna turns to them.

  • ALANNA
  • Ehem.

  • The guys twist towards her, surprised and gape; she's beautiful.

  • She looks them up and down, then looks straight at them.

  • ALANNA
  • Three.

  • She turns on her heel and walks off.

  • The guys stand shocked, watching her exit.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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