Friday, March 28, 2008

88. Stories - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. TOP LEVEL OF PARKING GARAGE - NIGHT

  • JEREMY sighs as he walks slowly around the parking structure, inspecting the cars absently as his feet pull him around his beat on pure muscle memory.

  • He readjusts his uniform as he walks, and pulls his cap off to feel the breeze. It reads "Eagle Securities," below a badly-designed screeching at intruders, real and imagined.

  • He doesn't notice ANDREA at first, her dark jeans blending into the night.

  • She sits on the railing, her shoulder-length hair blowing in the breeze as she looks over the street far below.

  • Jeremy does a double-take.

  • JEREMY
  • Hey, Lady! You can't be there.

  • He is alert again, walking briskly towards her.

  • JEREMY
  • Lady, I'm sorry, you're going to have to leave. It's too late for you to be here.

  • Andrea doesn't turn.

  • ANDREA
  • Do you see the stories?

  • JEREMY
  • Lady...

  • ANDREA
  • Come here, look...all the stories.

  • Jeremy stops beside her and looks down, flinching at the height.

  • Andrea is pointing to the lights of the streets below and the flow of color that traces traffic as it races through the city.

  • JEREMY
  • Lady, look, you're trespassing.

  • ANDREA
  • Listen to the stories. Look...see that one?

  • Jeremy looks despite himself.

  • She is pointing to a man walking a dog; he disappears and reappears as he passes under streetlights.

  • ANDREA
  • He just found out he won the lottery, it's a nice chunk of cash, but a week ago he found out that his cancer is back, eating away at his body faster and faster every day, he has a month at most to live. So he's walking his dog, trying to figure out what to do. What to do with the money, what to do with the month.

  • JEREMY
  • That's nice, Lady, but you have to go.

  • She turns, and smiles gently at Jeremy, and he sees her face for the first time.

  • Hair spills down her face, earrings peeking shyly from behind the strands.

  • He is captivated.

  • ANDREA
  • Andrea, call me Andrea. Sit.

  • She pats the railing next to her, and he hesitates, then sits.

  • ANDREA
  • There, see?

  • A police car sits at a corner.

  • Jeremy nods.

  • ANDREA
  • That's Officer Markham. He just finished his last cup of coffee. He promised himself he'd cut back on the caffeine. So he got himself a soy pumpkin spice latte with a shot of caramel, and he's just savoring it. When his partner, Officer Povic asks what he got, he'll say "Black, like always."

  • Jeremy is caught up in the words.

  • He sees a young woman walking slowly, a smile on her face.

  • JEREMY
  • What about her?

  • ANDREA
  • What about her?

  • He pauses.

  • JEREMY
  • That's Amy Reid, she's had a pretty bad day. Her boss threatened to fire her, and she knows it was her fault, and she's never had a better job. She found out her overdraft was a lot larger than she had thought, and her mother just really doesn't understand why she's still pursuing this writing nonsense. But two minutes ago, she got a call from Harpers. Her first article got published.

  • Andrea grins at him.

  • ANDREA
  • Do you hear them?

  • JEREMY
  • Yeah.

  • They stare at the street.

  • Jeremy points.

  • JEREMY
  • That's Mark.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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