- FADE IN:
- EXT. TOP LEVEL OF PARKING GARAGE - NIGHT
- JEREMY sighs as he walks slowly around the parking structure, inspecting the cars absently as his feet pull him around his beat on pure muscle memory.
- He readjusts his uniform as he walks, and pulls his cap off to feel the breeze. It reads "Eagle Securities," below a badly-designed screeching at intruders, real and imagined.
- He doesn't notice ANDREA at first, her dark jeans blending into the night.
- She sits on the railing, her shoulder-length hair blowing in the breeze as she looks over the street far below.
- Jeremy does a double-take.
- JEREMY
- Hey, Lady! You can't be there.
- He is alert again, walking briskly towards her.
- JEREMY
- Lady, I'm sorry, you're going to have to leave. It's too late for you to be here.
- Andrea doesn't turn.
- ANDREA
- Do you see the stories?
- JEREMY
- Lady...
- ANDREA
- Come here, look...all the stories.
- Jeremy stops beside her and looks down, flinching at the height.
- Andrea is pointing to the lights of the streets below and the flow of color that traces traffic as it races through the city.
- JEREMY
- Lady, look, you're trespassing.
- ANDREA
- Listen to the stories. Look...see that one?
- Jeremy looks despite himself.
- She is pointing to a man walking a dog; he disappears and reappears as he passes under streetlights.
- ANDREA
- He just found out he won the lottery, it's a nice chunk of cash, but a week ago he found out that his cancer is back, eating away at his body faster and faster every day, he has a month at most to live. So he's walking his dog, trying to figure out what to do. What to do with the money, what to do with the month.
- JEREMY
- That's nice, Lady, but you have to go.
- She turns, and smiles gently at Jeremy, and he sees her face for the first time.
- Hair spills down her face, earrings peeking shyly from behind the strands.
- He is captivated.
- ANDREA
- Andrea, call me Andrea. Sit.
- She pats the railing next to her, and he hesitates, then sits.
- ANDREA
- There, see?
- A police car sits at a corner.
- Jeremy nods.
- ANDREA
- That's Officer Markham. He just finished his last cup of coffee. He promised himself he'd cut back on the caffeine. So he got himself a soy pumpkin spice latte with a shot of caramel, and he's just savoring it. When his partner, Officer Povic asks what he got, he'll say "Black, like always."
- Jeremy is caught up in the words.
- He sees a young woman walking slowly, a smile on her face.
- JEREMY
- What about her?
- ANDREA
- What about her?
- He pauses.
- JEREMY
- That's Amy Reid, she's had a pretty bad day. Her boss threatened to fire her, and she knows it was her fault, and she's never had a better job. She found out her overdraft was a lot larger than she had thought, and her mother just really doesn't understand why she's still pursuing this writing nonsense. But two minutes ago, she got a call from Harpers. Her first article got published.
- Andrea grins at him.
- ANDREA
- Do you hear them?
- JEREMY
- Yeah.
- They stare at the street.
- Jeremy points.
- JEREMY
- That's Mark.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Friday, March 28, 2008
88. Stories - Leslie
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