- FADE IN:
- EXT. SANTA MONICA BLVD - DAY
- A mass of cars sit, packed tight for miles in the city's clogged arteries.
- INT. HONDA CIVIC - DAY
- ABNER sits drumming his fingers against the steering wheel.
- He runs a hand through his thick black hair and patiently studies the road.
- JAMIE sits staring through the passenger window with glazed eyes at the congestion.
- She absently fiddles with the edge of her dusty-green skirt, plucking at strands of fiber transferred to the skirt from her sweater.
- Abner turns and watches the cars across the median whizzing by, gazing at them with pursed lips.
- Jamie glances over at him, then quickly glances back to the window before he notices.
- She turns to steal another glance...and meets his eyes.
- ABNER
- What?
- JAMIE
- Nothing...
- ABNER
- Look, I'm sorry you're late, it's not my fault there's this much traffic.
- The cars inch forward.
- JAMIE
- We could have left earlier.
- ABNER
- I had to get ready.
- JAMIE
- You were preening for a whole hour. Preening!
- The cars inch forward again.
- Abner doesn't respond, but stares back at his window.
- He fiddles with his wedding ring.
- The traffic begins to flow and Abner hits the gas speeding up.
- Jamie looks over at him, her lips curling nastily.
- As the car passes through an intersection, a hummer comes from nowhere and slams into them.
- Their bodies are flung around like rag dolls, and Jamie lands in Abner's lap in an ironic embrace, his frustration locked into place, her sneer frozen forever on her face.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
64. Jam - Leslie
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