Tuesday, March 4, 2008

64. Jam - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. SANTA MONICA BLVD - DAY

  • A mass of cars sit, packed tight for miles in the city's clogged arteries.

  • INT. HONDA CIVIC - DAY

  • ABNER sits drumming his fingers against the steering wheel.

  • He runs a hand through his thick black hair and patiently studies the road.

  • JAMIE sits staring through the passenger window with glazed eyes at the congestion.

  • She absently fiddles with the edge of her dusty-green skirt, plucking at strands of fiber transferred to the skirt from her sweater.

  • Abner turns and watches the cars across the median whizzing by, gazing at them with pursed lips.

  • Jamie glances over at him, then quickly glances back to the window before he notices.

  • She turns to steal another glance...and meets his eyes.

  • ABNER
  • What?

  • JAMIE
  • Nothing...

  • ABNER
  • Look, I'm sorry you're late, it's not my fault there's this much traffic.

  • The cars inch forward.

  • JAMIE
  • We could have left earlier.

  • ABNER
  • I had to get ready.

  • JAMIE
  • You were preening for a whole hour. Preening!

  • The cars inch forward again.

  • Abner doesn't respond, but stares back at his window.

  • He fiddles with his wedding ring.

  • The traffic begins to flow and Abner hits the gas speeding up.

  • Jamie looks over at him, her lips curling nastily.

  • As the car passes through an intersection, a hummer comes from nowhere and slams into them.

  • Their bodies are flung around like rag dolls, and Jamie lands in Abner's lap in an ironic embrace, his frustration locked into place, her sneer frozen forever on her face.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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