Saturday, March 8, 2008

68. Alone - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • INT. THE TABERNACLE - NIGHT

  • The venue is packed with people as the band EDITH takes the stage.

  • Audience members in the three balconies lean forward, some standing as the roar of the crowd builds from the floor and rises towards the ceiling..

  • RIANNE stands near the stage, eyes closed as the screaming builds.

  • She sways back and forth, the sound filling her.

  • The DRUMMER raises his sticks.

  • DRUMMER
  • 1, 2, 3, 4!

  • The beat grows louder.

  • The LEAD GUITARIST crouches, and then his fingers fly across the strings, slapping and plucking.

  • The RHYTHM and BASS kick in, and the SAXOPHONE wails, high above the layers of sound.

  • The sound builds, weaving in and out, intertwining, and then explodes, leaving the audience reveling in the shock wave.

  • Rianne rocks back and forth arms tight around her one moment, high in the air the next moment, dancing in her own way, wrapped in a wall of sound, surrounded by thousands and yet completely alone.

  • She dances on, twirling, throwing in a rock-step here, spinning left there.

  • INT. THE TABERNACLE - LATER

  • The evening has worn on, and the crowd has thinned.

  • Rianne keeps dancing as more and more people leave.

  • The band finishes its set to tired cheering, and the crowd flows away, but Rianne dances on, to the music, now imagined.

  • The band leaves, and only the cleaning crew is left, a lone man inside the massive room, sleepily pushing cups around the sticky floor with his large broom.

  • Rianne slowly brings her arms down, and opens her eyes for the first time, surprised to be alone in the darkness.

  • She blinks, her eyes adjusting to the dark, then quietly slips away.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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