- FADE IN:
- INT. THE TABERNACLE - NIGHT
- The venue is packed with people as the band EDITH takes the stage.
- Audience members in the three balconies lean forward, some standing as the roar of the crowd builds from the floor and rises towards the ceiling..
- RIANNE stands near the stage, eyes closed as the screaming builds.
- She sways back and forth, the sound filling her.
- The DRUMMER raises his sticks.
- DRUMMER
- 1, 2, 3, 4!
- The beat grows louder.
- The LEAD GUITARIST crouches, and then his fingers fly across the strings, slapping and plucking.
- The RHYTHM and BASS kick in, and the SAXOPHONE wails, high above the layers of sound.
- The sound builds, weaving in and out, intertwining, and then explodes, leaving the audience reveling in the shock wave.
- Rianne rocks back and forth arms tight around her one moment, high in the air the next moment, dancing in her own way, wrapped in a wall of sound, surrounded by thousands and yet completely alone.
- She dances on, twirling, throwing in a rock-step here, spinning left there.
- INT. THE TABERNACLE - LATER
- The evening has worn on, and the crowd has thinned.
- Rianne keeps dancing as more and more people leave.
- The band finishes its set to tired cheering, and the crowd flows away, but Rianne dances on, to the music, now imagined.
- The band leaves, and only the cleaning crew is left, a lone man inside the massive room, sleepily pushing cups around the sticky floor with his large broom.
- Rianne slowly brings her arms down, and opens her eyes for the first time, surprised to be alone in the darkness.
- She blinks, her eyes adjusting to the dark, then quietly slips away.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Saturday, March 8, 2008
68. Alone - Leslie
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