Saturday, March 22, 2008

82. Invisble - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. STREET CORNER - DAY

  • ALANA leans against the wall of the shop at the street corner.

  • She wears dirty jeans and worn boots with little bits of newspaper stuffed into the soles, temporarily patching holes.

  • Long stringy dreads drift down her face and back, her eyes holding onto one last spark of hope.

  • She holds a cardboard sign, a dirty and heartbreaking SOS.

  • It reads "Please help, I'm lost, I just need enough money for food."

  • A small cap lies at her feet, like an opening mouth waiting to be fed.

  • People pass her, just another uncomfortable bump in a busy day.

  • She sits silent, head down, occasionally looking up.

  • A WELL-DRESSED MAN approaches, and she focuses on him.

  • ALANA
  • Please...

  • Her voice comes out in a whisper,and she clears her throat to speak louder, but the man is long gone.

  • The crowds speed into blurs passing Alana without ever seeing her as the day travels on.

  • EXT. STREET CORNER - EVENING

  • The day speeds into night, and the people slow, blur returning to the slow footsteps of friends heading for their favorite bars.

  • Alana sits, empty hat next to her, waiting.

  • MATT's group passes her, and he stops, seeing her..

  • She feels his eyes, but doesn't care to look up.

  • He slips away from the group, and they continue on.

  • He walks back to her, digging in his pockets for some kind of change.

  • MATT
  • I'm sorry, I don't have anything.

  • He stops, and sees her eyes.

  • He stands frozen.

  • Then he slowly moves to the wall, and sits down next to her.

  • They sit, as crowds pass them by, becoming blurs, leaving only the two of them visible.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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