- FADE IN:
- EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT
- JEREMY rides his bike slowly down the street, wobbling every so often as he slows to stare at the large black box he clutches in his left hand.
- He grins at the box, unaware of the squad car in front of him.
- An OFFICER looks out the window of the car and spots the black box.
- OFFICER MUNEZ
- Gun!
- His partner jumps outside of the car, gun drawn.
- OFFICER MUNEZ
- Kid! Stop.
- Jeremy looks up and hits the breaks, but keeps going forwardl; he panics and tries to speed up.
- Munez and his partner fire.
- Jeremy falls, clutching the box.
- Officer Munez approaches carefully, gun drawn.
- He kneels over Jeremy's bloody body.
- He sees the black box.
- OFFICER MUNEZ
- Oh God.
- He carefully pulls the top of the box off, revealing a single, long-stemmed blood-orange daisy with a note tied around the stem.
- He buries his face in his hands.
- OFFICER MUNEZ
- God.
- EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - LATER
- Cameras flash as the crime scene team surrounds Jeremy's body.
- A GLOVED HAND slowly pulls the rose from the box.
- A camera flashes.
- INT. MARIA AND JOHN'S FLOWER CREATIONS - DAY
- Jeremy pores over the selection of daisies, and finally picks the one he likes.
- The store keeper starts to box it.
- JEREMY
- Wait, please.
- He pulls small note from his pocket and wraps it around the stem.
- The store keeper places the flower and note in a black box.
- EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT
- A camera flashes and an INVESTIGATOR pulls an intricately twisted piece of wire with cowry shell in the center from Jeremy's pocket.
- A camera flashes.
- EXT. VENICE BEACH - DAY
- Jeremy runs in the sand, trying to catch ANGEL.
- She never faces us, her long hair wrapping around her face and back.
- Something catchers her eye, and she stops, kneeling in the sand.
- She pulls a cowry shell trapped in some wire from the sand, and begins reshaping the wire.
- EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT
- Cameras flash around the scene, and the coroner waits above the body.
- An investigator pulls the blood-spattered bike up from the ground.
- A camera flashes.
- EXT. BEVERLY HILLS - DAY
- Angel and Jeremy race their bikes along the sidwalks of Beverly Hills.
- Patrons at roadside cafes glance nervously at the black kids racing along the streets.
- Jeremy catches their looks and makes a face at Angel.
- She laughs, and he grins, caught up in her joy.
- He slams into the side of the table, and his pantsleg rips.
- Her laughter rings out again.
- EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT
- The zipping of a body bag becomes the focal point of the crime scene for a moment, sirens seeming to quiet for a moment in respect.
- Jeremy's body is placed on a gurney, and wheeled past Officer Munez, who sits at the corner of a curb, still clutching his head.
- A camera flashes.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Thursday, March 13, 2008
73. Flash - Leslie
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