Thursday, March 13, 2008

73. Flash - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT

  • JEREMY rides his bike slowly down the street, wobbling every so often as he slows to stare at the large black box he clutches in his left hand.

  • He grins at the box, unaware of the squad car in front of him.

  • An OFFICER looks out the window of the car and spots the black box.

  • OFFICER MUNEZ
  • Gun!

  • His partner jumps outside of the car, gun drawn.

  • OFFICER MUNEZ
  • Kid! Stop.

  • Jeremy looks up and hits the breaks, but keeps going forwardl; he panics and tries to speed up.

  • Munez and his partner fire.

  • Jeremy falls, clutching the box.

  • Officer Munez approaches carefully, gun drawn.

  • He kneels over Jeremy's bloody body.

  • He sees the black box.

  • OFFICER MUNEZ
  • Oh God.

  • He carefully pulls the top of the box off, revealing a single, long-stemmed blood-orange daisy with a note tied around the stem.

  • He buries his face in his hands.

  • OFFICER MUNEZ
  • God.

  • EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - LATER

  • Cameras flash as the crime scene team surrounds Jeremy's body.

  • A GLOVED HAND slowly pulls the rose from the box.

  • A camera flashes.

  • INT. MARIA AND JOHN'S FLOWER CREATIONS - DAY

  • Jeremy pores over the selection of daisies, and finally picks the one he likes.

  • The store keeper starts to box it.

  • JEREMY
  • Wait, please.

  • He pulls small note from his pocket and wraps it around the stem.

  • The store keeper places the flower and note in a black box.

  • EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT

  • A camera flashes and an INVESTIGATOR pulls an intricately twisted piece of wire with cowry shell in the center from Jeremy's pocket.

  • A camera flashes.

  • EXT. VENICE BEACH - DAY

  • Jeremy runs in the sand, trying to catch ANGEL.

  • She never faces us, her long hair wrapping around her face and back.

  • Something catchers her eye, and she stops, kneeling in the sand.

  • She pulls a cowry shell trapped in some wire from the sand, and begins reshaping the wire.

  • EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT

  • Cameras flash around the scene, and the coroner waits above the body.

  • An investigator pulls the blood-spattered bike up from the ground.

  • A camera flashes.

  • EXT. BEVERLY HILLS - DAY

  • Angel and Jeremy race their bikes along the sidwalks of Beverly Hills.

  • Patrons at roadside cafes glance nervously at the black kids racing along the streets.

  • Jeremy catches their looks and makes a face at Angel.

  • She laughs, and he grins, caught up in her joy.

  • He slams into the side of the table, and his pantsleg rips.

  • Her laughter rings out again.

  • EXT. WILSHIRE BLVD - NIGHT

  • The zipping of a body bag becomes the focal point of the crime scene for a moment, sirens seeming to quiet for a moment in respect.

  • Jeremy's body is placed on a gurney, and wheeled past Officer Munez, who sits at the corner of a curb, still clutching his head.

  • A camera flashes.

  • FADE TO BLACK.




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