- FADE IN:
- EXT. BUSY CITY STREET - DAY
- NELLA stands in the center of a busy sidewalk as people jostle and push in their frustrated attempts to get where they are going.
- She stands still, her flared jeans rustling with the crowd’s movement.
- She plays nervously with her braids and looks around at the crowd.
- She grabs a BUSINESSWOMAN in an attempt to get her attention, but the woman simply shrugs the HAND off and races away.
- Nella looks around more frantically
- She tries grabbing other people, but they don’t acknowledge her.
- Frustrated she screams, but no sounds come out of her mouth.
- She tries to scream again, terror slipping into her eyes.
- Business-suited men walk past, grinning and telling jokes.
- She stands yelling again and again, but no sound comes.
- Nella stops, frustrated, and stands still, letting the crowds tides push and pull at her.
- Cars whiz past and people continually race by behind her.
- She shakes his shoulder and he glances at her, then back away.
- She shakes him again, and he doesn’t seem to notice.
- Her eyes travel down his thick torso and end at his belt.
- His gun holster stares back at her.
- She reaches for it, then stops, then reaches again, touching it.
- She pulls her hand away, then determined, reaches for the gun again and grabs it.
- Nella steps back to the center of the sidewalk and slowly places the gun to her head.
- She closes her eyes, swallows hard, and her finger straining, pulls the trigger.
- The explosion of the bullet leaving the barrel echoes around the buildings.
- Nella stumbles, then slowly dissolves, leaving the crowds whirling cluelessly around a girl-sized gap in the sidewalk.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Monday, January 28, 2008
28. Autophobia - Leslie
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