Monday, January 28, 2008

28. Autophobia - Leslie






  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. BUSY CITY STREET - DAY

  • NELLA stands in the center of a busy sidewalk as people jostle and push in their frustrated attempts to get where they are going.

  • She stands still, her flared jeans rustling with the crowd’s movement.

  • She plays nervously with her braids and looks around at the crowd.

  • She grabs a BUSINESSWOMAN in an attempt to get her attention, but the woman simply shrugs the HAND off and races away.

  • Nella looks around more frantically

  • She tries grabbing other people, but they don’t acknowledge her.

  • Frustrated she screams, but no sounds come out of her mouth.

  • She tries to scream again, terror slipping into her eyes.

  • Business-suited men walk past, grinning and telling jokes.

  • She stands yelling again and again, but no sound comes.

  • Nella stops, frustrated, and stands still, letting the crowds tides push and pull at her.

  • Cars whiz past and people continually race by behind her.

  • She shakes his shoulder and he glances at her, then back away.

  • She shakes him again, and he doesn’t seem to notice.

  • Her eyes travel down his thick torso and end at his belt.

  • His gun holster stares back at her.

  • She reaches for it, then stops, then reaches again, touching it.

  • She pulls her hand away, then determined, reaches for the gun again and grabs it.

  • Nella steps back to the center of the sidewalk and slowly places the gun to her head.

  • She closes her eyes, swallows hard, and her finger straining, pulls the trigger.

  • The explosion of the bullet leaving the barrel echoes around the buildings.

  • Nella stumbles, then slowly dissolves, leaving the crowds whirling cluelessly around a girl-sized gap in the sidewalk.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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