Tuesday, January 22, 2008

22. Drifting - Leslie

Recommended listening/viewing for this script - Innocence Mission's cover of "Moon River."





  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. FOREST STREAM - DAY

  • ELLEN and SMITH lie next to each other on the stream’s bank.

  • Autumn leaves float down from the trees on a warm Indian summer breeze.

  • He’s dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, a dark blazer spread on the grass beside him.

  • Ellen’s short hair lifts in the breeze and she pulls at her orange t-shirt trying to get a burr out. Her loose skirt spreads around her ankles revealing her bare, chocolate-colored feet.

  • She looks over to steal a glance at him and catches him staring at her.

  • His eyes dart away and she pokes him.

  • ELLEN
  • Ashamed eh?

  • Smith laughs.

  • SMITH
  • You weren’t supposed to catch me.

  • ELLEN
  • We’ve been friends too long, I’m way ahead of you buddy.

  • Smith rolls onto his stomach, making sure he doesn’t touch her.

  • She notices and wrinkles her nose at him.

  • ELLEN
  • Keepin’ it platonic Smith?

  • He ignores her, rests his chin on his folded arms and follows a leaf as it floats down the stream, causing fish caught under its shadow to scatter.

  • Ellen looks over at him, starts to say something, then reconsiders and follows the same leaf.

  • Smith glances at here again.

  • SMITH
  • How long have we been friends?

  • ELLEN
  • You know...

  • SMITH
  • Tell me anyway.

  • ELLEN
  • Ok...it’s been five years...Muse Cafe...you were talking about love and drifting

  • SMITH
  • Its taken me that long to realize something.

  • He pauses, waiting.

  • ELLEN
  • What are you trying to drag out?

  • SMITH
  • Play along, will you?

  • ELLEN
  • What did you realize?

  • SMITH
  • That there's no one I'd rather travel the world with...than you

  • Ellen turns and looks at him, serious.

  • ELLEN
  • That’s sweet of you. You’re my best friend too.

  • SMITH
  • Ellen.

  • He grabs her hand and she looks down, startled.

  • SMITH
  • You are my best friend, I don’t really want anyone else. Will you travel with me. It’s a long journey, but I want to do it with you. Let’s drift away together.

  • He pulls his hand away, leaving a ring with a tiny circle of diamonds at the center, in her hand.

  • Ellen swallows, looks at the stream, then back at him.

  • She closes her eyes for a moment.

  • Smith looks at her, terrified.

  • She opens them and laughs softly, then slides the ring around her finger.

  • She touches his cheek, then laughs again, and grabs a handful of bright red leaves and tosses it above their heads.

  • ELLEN
  • Ok, let’s drift.

  • FADE TO BLACK.

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