Sunday, November 9, 2008

314. Alanna and the Shared Balloon: A Balloon Parable - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. PLAYGROUND - DAY

  • ALANNA sits on the swings happily, a yellow balloon tied around her finger.

  • She swings back and forth, her eyes following the yellow sphere as it bobs back and forth.

  • ERIC sits glumly at the base of the slide, scooping up handfuls of sand and tossing them back onto the ground.

  • He looks wistfully over at Alanna's balloon.

  • Alanna catches Eric's eye on the downswing.

  • She slows the swing, looking at him, then following his eyes to the balloon.

  • She makes a face and jumps off the swing.

  • Alanna begins to walk away, then stops, and looks at Eric's wistful face.

  • She makes another face and walks over to him.

  • She pulls the balloon off her finger, ties it around his and smiles.

  • He looks at her, then the balloon and breaks out into a huge grin.

  • Standing up, Eric races off towards the jungle gym, balloon happily in tow.

  • Alanna slowly makes her way back to the swing, kicking at the dirt.

  • She passes a bush and stops suddenly.

  • A yellow balloon is bobbing, tangled in the branches.

  • She looks back - Eric is still playing happily with his new balloon.

  • She frees the balloon, ties it to her finger and hops onto the swing, gazing contentedly at her balloon.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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