Thursday, December 25, 2008

360. The Borrowed Coat - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. THE SPOT SOUP KITCHEN - DAY

  • The Spot is a small, cafe-like space, with 6 large, circular tables arranged neatly around the room and a few couches in the corners. Each table is decorated with Christmas candles and wreaths.

  • The room is packed with a variety of homeless people enjoying Christmas dinner.

  • A serving window connects the dining room with the kitchen, in which several volunteers are busy cooking.

  • MIRI carefully monitors the turkey and potato wedges cooking in the oven.

  • She bastes the potatoes with an herb butter mixture, watches for a moment more, then closes the heavy metal door.

  • A box of clothes sits in a corner of the kitchen.

  • Miri walks past it, to a stool over which her heavy wool coat is draped and feels around her pockets.

  • She pulls out her cellphone and checks the time, then absently sticks it into her pants' pocket.

  • MIRI
  • Abby?

  • ABBY, a tall woman busy searing chicken spins around.

  • Miri jerks her head in the direction of the clothes.

  • ABBY
  • Oh, kids from one of the local churches...they're going to stop by and pick 'em up - take 'em to some of the shelters.

  • MIRI
  • Ah.

  • She returns to the potatoes.

  • The front door of the soup kitchen bursts open and a group of kids, wrapped tight in coats and scarves against the cold.

  • The weave between the tables, talking and laughing loudly.

  • FERNANDO, one of the group leaders grabs the box, spilling some onto the floor.

  • He grabs them and grabs Miri's coat as well, tossing into onto the pile.

  • FERNANDO
  • Hey, thanks so much for letting use the space.

  • ABBY
  • No problem at all. How's it gone so far?

  • FERNANDO
  • Ah, it's been great, great. Some of the kids are going to head off and drop these off at a few places. Thanks again.

  • Abby and Miri wave and he heads out, the flock of teenagers and young adults following him.

  • Miri pulls the potatoes and turkey out of the oven, placing them on the serving window counter.

  • MIRI
  • Alright, Abs, I'm out.

  • ABBY
  • By darling, thanks for stopping by and helping - you and that fantastic turkey you make.

  • MIRI
  • You just want me for my turkey.

  • ABBY
  • All too true.

  • Miri heads out of the kitchen and to the front door.

  • She opens the front door and is hit with a blast of cold air.

  • MIRI
  • Oh!

  • She closes the door and rushes back to the kitchen.

  • Heading to the stool, she stops short, noticing that her coat isn't there.

  • She looks around.

  • MIRI
  • Hey, has anyone seen my coat.

  • ABBY
  • Stool.

  • MIRI
  • Nope. I gotta find it - I've got my iPod in the pocket...and my keys! Oh, my keys...shoot!

  • Abby turns around.

  • ABBY
  • Huh...you think that they?

  • MIRI
  • Nah, couldn't have, it wasn't close to that box.

  • ABBY
  • It was a bit.

  • Miri waves her hand and turns in a circle, looking.

  • She walks back into the dining room, searching.

  • INT. CAR - DAY

  • The box of clothes bounces along on the backseat of the car, a piece Miri's coat sticking out a few layers from the top.

  • INT. THE SPOT SOUP KITCHEN - DAY

  • The Spot is emptying quickly, its patrons bundling up and slipping out into the late afternoon.

  • Miri and Abby washes dishes in the kitchen.

  • ABBY
  • Thanks for sticking around.

  • She smirks.

  • MIRI
  • Not funny.

  • ABBY
  • Well, at least Fernando's looking for it.

  • MIRI
  • You know, the iPod doesn't really matter that much - I've got all the music on the computer anyway...but the keys. I need my keys. And it's cold! I'm not going out there without that jacket. It's my nice jacket. My hippie jacket from London.

  • Abby grimaces sympathetically and keeps scrubbing at a pot.

  • ABBY
  • You did call him, right?

  • MIRI
  • I called - he's looking.

  • MONTAGE

  • 1. The car comes to a stop and clothes are grabbed from the box, Miri's coat gets shoved aside.

  • 2. Miri sprawls on one of the couches in the now empty soup kitchen. She gets up and searches for the coat a bit, then goes the kitchen and grabs a broom and begins to sweep the dining room.

  • 3. The car speeds off to its new destination, the box somewhat emptier.

  • 4. Miri sits up straight on the couch, the broom leaning against the couch, inspecting her phone, then pacing.

  • 5. The car is stopped in front of another shelter and more clothes are pulled from it.

  • 6. Miri sits on the edge of a tabling staring off into space while Abby sits on the couch reading a magazine.

  • 7. The car pulls into another shelter and the rest of the clothes are pulled out.

  • END MONTAGE

  • INT. MIRIAM'S HOUSE WOMEN'S SHELTER - EVENING

  • Fernando stands in the corner of the shelter lobby speaking quietly into his cell phone.

  • FERNANDO
  • Hey, Hey Miri - Yes, this is Fernando. Ok, so I found your coat, but there's a problem.

  • He looks across the room.

  • LUCY is wrapped in the coat, enjoying its warmth.

  • FERNANDO
  • No, no - it's just that, it was given to someone. Um, I can get it for you.

  • INT. THE SPOT SOUP KITCHEN - EVENING

  • Miri sits on the couch, holding the phone sleepily.

  • MIRI
  • Oh, no, no, let her keep it. But just one favor.

  • INT. MIRIAM'S HOUSE WOMEN'S SHELTER - MOMENTS LATER

  • Fernando approaches Lucy awkwardly.

  • FERNANDO
  • Would you mind, um, could I see the coat for a second? I promise, I'll give it back.

  • She looks at him skeptically.

  • FERNANDO
  • I just...there's something in the pockets, um, something that I have to give back to someone.

  • She just looks at him.

  • LUCY
  • Well, I'm not taking it off.

  • FERNANDO
  • Umm.

  • He reaches over gingerly and sticks his hand in one of the pockets - its empty.

  • He tries the other one, but no luck.

  • FERNANDO
  • Is there an inside pocket?

  • She contemplates for a moment, then slowly opens her coat.

  • He carefully reaches inside and lets out a sigh of relief as he pulls out a tangle of keys, headphones, and the iPod.

  • INT. THE SPOT SOUP KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER

  • Miri holds the phone to his ear, half listening.

  • She looks over at Abby, who waits expectantly, and whispers.

  • MIRI
  • He's so sweet, he searched all over East LA for that stupid coat.

  • She smiles as Fernando says something.

  • MIRI
  • No, no, it's fine. I'm sorry you had to go searching - thanks so much, I really appreciate it. Ok, goodbye, you have a Merry Christmas too.

  • She hangs up, slipping the phone into her pocket.

  • ABBY
  • So, did he find your jacket, is he bringing it back?

  • MIRI
  • Yes, no.

  • She leans back into the couch cushions and closes her eyes, leaving Abby to stare at her, confused.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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