- FADE IN:
- INT. MASTER BEDROOM - AFTERNOON
- MATTHEW sits at the edge of his bed, a pair of dress shoes on his knees.
- LUCY, his daughter, sits on the bed next to him, another pair of shoes on her knees, trying to look as much like him as possible.
- A little table sits in front of them, Matthew's shoe-shine kit and a glass with a little water neatly laid out on the wooden surface.
- Matthew grabs a can of shoe polish and pops it open, laying the top back on the table.
- MATTHEW
- Alright, now watch carefully. You put just a drop of water in the top, like this.
- He pours water from the glass into the metal tin.
- He grabs a well-worn rag from his hit and taking the wax in one hand he applies wax in a smooth circular motion to the rag.
- Lucy grabs a smaller tin of black wax and quickly copies his action.
- Her motion is unpracticed and jerky.
- MATTHEW
- Smoothly, smoothly. Little circles like this. Ok, good, now see, you have enough? Dip it into the water, just a drop.
- He takes his cloth, the waxed-up section wrapped around his finger, and dabs it carefully into the water.
- A small, perfectly round droplet stands sits on the wax.
- MATTHEW
- See, this is how you do a spit-shine.
- Lucy watches, carefully, quietly.
- He takes the cloth and begins applying it to his left shoe in the same smooth, round motion.
- Lucy copies him.
- The scuffed, shiny surface of the shoes go to a dull, matte, black.
- They work quietly, Lucy following his every motion, polishing the exact same parts of her shoe as he.
- He finishes the left shoe and places it on the table and begins on the right shoe.
- He looks over as Lucy begins her new shoe.
- MATTHEW
- There! You're getting it. Just like my father taught me.
- LUCY
- How old were you?
- MATTHEW
- Oh, I think I was your age.
- Lucy looks at him and wrinkles her nose, trying to imagine him as a nine-year old.
- MATTHEW
- Can't see it can you?
- He pokes her with an elbow and she giggles.
- MATTHEW
- Your grandfather taught me well. When I was a teenager, I worked at a barbershop shining shoes for the guys getting haircuts. Mr. Oglesby's barbershop...
- He keeps polishing quietly, lost in memories.
- LUCY
- You're gonna make me work at a barbershop?
- He pokes her again.
- MATTHEW
- Only if you want.
- They finish their shoes.
- MATTHEW
- Ok, here's the fun part.
- He grabs the left shoe and a thick, black brush, and begins brushing the shoe vigorously in strong, choppy motions.
- Lucy giggles.
- Matthew chuckles at the odd motion.
- MATTHEW
- You try it.
- Lucy grabs her left shoe and begins brushing in exaggerated motions.
- They laugh and he mimics her.
- MATTHEW
- Look, look, you see that?
- As they brush, the matte color of the shoes transforms into a clean, shiny, reflective black.
- LUCY
- Ohhh.
- MATTHEW
- This is my favorite part. Careful there, don't miss the back. Good, good.
- Lucy scoots closer to him and he smiles at her.
- They sit, brushing and laughing in the afternoon sun.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Monday, December 8, 2008
343. Fathers and Daughters - Leslie
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