Monday, December 8, 2008

343. Fathers and Daughters - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. MASTER BEDROOM - AFTERNOON

  • MATTHEW sits at the edge of his bed, a pair of dress shoes on his knees.

  • LUCY, his daughter, sits on the bed next to him, another pair of shoes on her knees, trying to look as much like him as possible.

  • A little table sits in front of them, Matthew's shoe-shine kit and a glass with a little water neatly laid out on the wooden surface.

  • Matthew grabs a can of shoe polish and pops it open, laying the top back on the table.

  • MATTHEW
  • Alright, now watch carefully. You put just a drop of water in the top, like this.

  • He pours water from the glass into the metal tin.

  • He grabs a well-worn rag from his hit and taking the wax in one hand he applies wax in a smooth circular motion to the rag.

  • Lucy grabs a smaller tin of black wax and quickly copies his action.

  • Her motion is unpracticed and jerky.

  • MATTHEW
  • Smoothly, smoothly. Little circles like this. Ok, good, now see, you have enough? Dip it into the water, just a drop.

  • He takes his cloth, the waxed-up section wrapped around his finger, and dabs it carefully into the water.

  • A small, perfectly round droplet stands sits on the wax.

  • MATTHEW
  • See, this is how you do a spit-shine.

  • Lucy watches, carefully, quietly.

  • He takes the cloth and begins applying it to his left shoe in the same smooth, round motion.

  • Lucy copies him.

  • The scuffed, shiny surface of the shoes go to a dull, matte, black.

  • They work quietly, Lucy following his every motion, polishing the exact same parts of her shoe as he.

  • He finishes the left shoe and places it on the table and begins on the right shoe.

  • He looks over as Lucy begins her new shoe.

  • MATTHEW
  • There! You're getting it. Just like my father taught me.

  • LUCY
  • How old were you?

  • MATTHEW
  • Oh, I think I was your age.

  • Lucy looks at him and wrinkles her nose, trying to imagine him as a nine-year old.

  • MATTHEW
  • Can't see it can you?

  • He pokes her with an elbow and she giggles.

  • MATTHEW
  • Your grandfather taught me well. When I was a teenager, I worked at a barbershop shining shoes for the guys getting haircuts. Mr. Oglesby's barbershop...

  • He keeps polishing quietly, lost in memories.

  • LUCY
  • You're gonna make me work at a barbershop?

  • He pokes her again.

  • MATTHEW
  • Only if you want.

  • They finish their shoes.

  • MATTHEW
  • Ok, here's the fun part.

  • He grabs the left shoe and a thick, black brush, and begins brushing the shoe vigorously in strong, choppy motions.

  • Lucy giggles.

  • Matthew chuckles at the odd motion.

  • MATTHEW
  • You try it.

  • Lucy grabs her left shoe and begins brushing in exaggerated motions.

  • They laugh and he mimics her.

  • MATTHEW
  • Look, look, you see that?

  • As they brush, the matte color of the shoes transforms into a clean, shiny, reflective black.

  • LUCY
  • Ohhh.

  • MATTHEW
  • This is my favorite part. Careful there, don't miss the back. Good, good.

  • Lucy scoots closer to him and he smiles at her.

  • They sit, brushing and laughing in the afternoon sun.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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