Friday, December 12, 2008

347. Stranded - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • EXT. CITY SQUARE - LATE AFTERNOON

  • ALI sits on one of the benches that rings the square, her well-traveled backpack, sitting next to her.

  • The backpack, covered with patches and a small Union Jack, sits taller than her.

  • Her eyes are ringed with a light layer of eye-liner, just enough to attract attention without being overplayed.

  • She looks out over the cobblestones of the square, her eye's half-empty - there is a distance in her gaze.

  • Tourists criss-cross the square snapping pictures and talking loudly and those to whom the square is a piece of national heritage avoid the interlopers with no small amount of condescension.

  • Ali reaches around her neck and yanks at a cloth strap wrapped around her neck.

  • With a little effort, she pulls a small pouch out from it's hiding place under her shirt and opens it.

  • She pulls a one-way ticket stub from New York to London from the pouch, then her American passport, worn and beaten from hard use.

  • She feels around the pouch, her fingers searching earnestly.

  • All she discovers are a few Euro coins.

  • She looks one more time, but the result is no different.

  • A MAN IN A COWBOY HAT walks past, devouring a pack of large french fries he's bought from the McDonald's whose garish sign mars the ancient square.

  • Ali stares after him, eyes fixed the food.

  • She digs into her pockets, searching for more, but they are empty, save for a pen and some scraps of paper.

  • She sits back, exhaling hard.

  • Biting her lip, Ali looks around, the light of the fading sun playing with her hair.

  • A group of tourists approaches and she looks at them, then away, then at them again.

  • They come closer.

  • She flinches, then closes her eyes for a moment.

  • Ali opens her eyes and holds her hand out.

  • ALI
  • Hey guys, could you just spare a little change?

  • They pass, some tossing looks of pity back at her, and she slumps.

  • Another tourist approaches, she braces, then holds her hand out again.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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