- FADE IN:
- EXT. BUST STOP - EVENING
- EVE and SCOTT sit alone on the bench watching the traffic go by.
- SCOTT
- Remember when we used to climb to the top of Mr. Allen's roof and watch the city?
- EVE
- Yeah. I miss doing that.
- SCOTT
- Me too. But poor Mr. Allen.
- EVE
- Who knew meth labs could explode like that?
- Scott snickers.
- SCOTT
- Who knew Mr. Allen would turn out to have a lab?
- EVE
- It shouldn't be funny.
- SCOTT
- But it so is.
- EVE
- Sadly. You ruined it all though, taking your little girlfriends up there, well, before Mr. Allen ruined it.
- SCOTT
- Yeah...
- EVE
- Making out with them. That was our spot!
- SCOTT
- I've never been kissed.
- EVE
- Not sure how you define kissing, but mashing your lips against one of those cheerleader types you went for counts.
- SCOTT
- To be fair, they weren't all like that.
- EVE
- Most.
- SCOTT
- Yeah, most.
- EVE
- So what do you mean?
- He looks at her for a long moment, weighing his words.
- Before he can speak, Eve inhales sharply.
- Scott spins around, then stops cold, feeling a coldness at his temple.
- ERIC and RICKY stand in front of him.
- Eric presses a gun to his head.
- SCOTT
- Look, I'm going to take my wallet from my pocket, you can take anything you want.
- Ricky grins playfully and flashes a rolex at him.
- RICKY
- You don't really have what I want, I can't speak for that one over there.
- He motions at Eric.
- RICKY
- She's got what I want.
- He grabs Eve's butt and takes her hand.
- RICKY
- EVE
- Come on sweety.
- Let go of me.
- Scott moves to protect Eve.
- Eric pushes the gun barrel into Scott's temple.
- ERIC
- You stay right there.
- Ricky begins pulling Eve to the dark lot behind the bus stop.
- RICKY
- You scream, your friend gets shot.
- EVE
- Please, please don't do this.
- Ricky responds by pulling her.
- Eve watches his eyes, then looks directly at Matt.
- He nods, almost imperceptibly.
- Ricky pulls her towards the lot and she goes limp.
- He relaxes and she spins kicking him in the groin.
- Eric begins to move the gun towards her and Matt elbows him, wrenching the gun from his grasp.
- He turns backing up against the wall of the bus stop and waving Eve towards him.
- She runs and stops next to him.
- He aims at Ricky.
- SCOTT
- Get up and walk away right now. Now
- RICKY
- Ok dude, ok.
- Ricky and Eric beat a quick retreat into the dark.
- Scott holds the gun, his hands shaking.
- Eve sits down next to him, quiet.
- She looks over at him, and touches his hand.
- EVE
- We still make a good team.
- Scott keeps looking around, watching.
- SCOTT
- We do. We really do.
- She scoots closer to him and lowers her voice.
- EVE
- What did you mean you'd never been kissed?
- SCOTT
- I never felt anything. That doesn't seem right...geez, how can you talk about this right now? Are you ok?
- EVE
- Yeah. It's better than just sitting here being afraid, and I'm curious.
- SCOTT
- There was never any kind of...spark, it was just skin on skin. It wasn't you.
- EVE
- What?
- SCOTT
- It wasn't you. I wanted to be kissing you. I was in love with you.
- EVE
- Wow.
- SCOTT
- But I was just the guy who was good at listening.
- EVE
- No, I was just waiting for you.
- SCOTT
- I was scared.
- EVE
- Of what?
- SCOTT
- A lot of things, they aren't that important right now. Look, what happens if they come back, with more guys?
- EVE
- We'll be ok...and you've got a gun.
- SCOTT
- Oh gosh, gun, yeah. I hate these things.
- EVE
- Well, keep pretending to know how to use it. You had me fooled. Do you still love me?
- There is an achingly long silence.
- SCOTT
- Yeah.
- Eve leans in.
- SCOTT
- Wait. Please...just wait for a second.
- He exhales slowly, looks around for good measure, then relaxes his grip on the gun, and looks at her, then breathes out again.
- SCOTT
- I just needed to be ready. Ok.
- They both lean in and kiss slowly.
- Eve places her hand against his cheek and presses it there for a long time.
- They both cry.
- EVE
- You feel that?
- Scott nods.
- She pulls his arm around her.
- EVE
- I'm so scared. Please just let the bus come soon.
- SCOTT
- It will. I've been waiting.
- EVE
- Me too; all my life.
- He pulls her closer, one arm around her, one resting on the gun as they wait in the dimly-lit bus stop for their ride home.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Friday, June 13, 2008
165. First Kiss - Leslie
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