Wednesday, June 11, 2008

163. The Edge - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. OFFICE BUILDING - DAY

  • ELLEN looks out over the city from her cubicle's large picture window.

  • The city spread hundreds of feet below as the bright sun sparkles off the surface of the buildings around her.

  • Construction cranes rise past the window from the lot far below.

  • White clouds float across the deep blue sky above.

  • She smiles and turns back to her her work.

  • There is a a loud whistling sound and she turns back to the window just in time to see a huge, out-of-control wrecking ball careening towards her window.

  • ELLEN
  • You've got to be kidding.

  • The ball smashes through the window and glass explodes into the office.

  • A thousand shards fly towards her and then everything stops.

  • She exhales softly.

  • A chunk of concrete with rebar sticking out of it is frozen in the air, inches away from her head; the wrecking ball is frozen halfway through the window and wall, and a wall of now-frozen glass floats a hairsbreadth away from her face.

  • She sits for a moment in frozen shock.

  • She slowly pushes her chair back and it moves with some resistance.

  • Standing, she pushes up on her tiptoes to look around the office: everything and everyone are frozen.

  • She turns around and starts.

  • A WOMAN is sitting at the edge of her desk, just beyond the reach of exploding glass.

  • She is dressed in a breathtaking red evening dress, her hair flowing around her shoulders and a simple pendant around her neck.

  • WOMAN
  • Hello Ellen.

  • ELLEN
  • Who are you?

  • WOMAN
  • You can call me Neco.

  • ELLEN
  • Why has everything stopped.

  • NECO
  • You're in the edge. The edge of a moment. And it really hasn't stopped, it's just moving very slowly. No one else will even realize it; it's all going to be over in a split second.

  • ELLEN
  • The edge? The moment? What are you talking about?

  • NECO
  • You're about to die.

  • Ellen, nods, not processing.

  • ELLEN
  • Some bedside manner you have. How do you know? Who are you.

  • NECO
  • Shh, enjoy thiS, this last moment, before the world goes dark.

  • ELLEN
  • I'm going to die? Why would I enjoy this?

  • NECO
  • Yes, you are going to die; would you rather be miserable?


  • ELLEN
  • I can't, I'm not ready, there are literally thousands of things I've never experienced. No one's proposed to me, I haven't seen Italy. Italy! I haven't even had gelato.

  • NECO
  • I'm sorry.

  • ELLEN
  • Who are you? Why can't you change anything.

  • NECO
  • I'm so very sorry.

  • Ellen begins to cry.

  • Neco notices the glass beginning to move slowly, almost imperceptibly.

  • She carefully walks over to the chair.

  • The closer she comes to Ellen, the greater the difference between the two seems.

  • Neco carries with her an ancient grace and she towers over Ellen.

  • She takes Ellen by the hand and pulls her into her lap, holding Ellen gently.

  • Ellen cries, shaking.

  • ELLEN
  • Why do I have to be in, on, whatever, on this edge? Why couldn't have been painless? Instant, no regrets, no knowledge.

  • NECO
  • Do you have regrets?

  • Ellen tries to regain control.

  • ELLEN
  • There's so much I'm going to miss; but I don't really want to think about what I'll regret. You didn't answer my question.

  • Neco looks at her for a moment and then begins to sing, a beautiful, haunting melody.

  • The debris and wrecking ball inches closer, becoming faster.

  • Ellen notices now.

  • She closes her eyes and listen to the lullaby.

  • ELLEN
  • You're Death.

  • Her eyes open, looking for confirmation.

  • Neco keeps singing, stroking Ellen's face.

  • The debris comes faster and faster.

  • ELLEN
  • Please.

  • Neco's lullaby becomes a soft, powerful chant.

  • ELLEN
  • Please.

  • Tears pour from Neco's eyes.

  • Time catches up and the chunk of concrete smashes into Ellen, followed by the wrecking bar.

  • Ellen is pinned to the floor, dying.

  • Neco has disappeared.

  • Ellen gasps, dying, as the office workers swirl frantically around her.

  • A firefighter walks to her, and kneels beside her.

  • He begins singing the chant.

  • Ellen's eyes flutter and then she dies.

  • The firefighter makes a strange gesture above her and whispers a blessing in a language older than earth.

  • He nods, stands, and walks away through the destroyed office.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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