Sunday, June 8, 2008

160. Shrapnel - Leslie







  • FADE IN:

  • INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

  • Robert traces his sleeping WIFE's arm with his finger, marveling at her smooth skin.

  • He twirls his finger, drawing invisible designs.

  • She stirs and turns to him, smiling.

  • He recoils as sand spills from her lips, pouring onto the bed.

  • She grins at him, revealing a row of bloody shrapnel instead of teeth.

  • He pulls back the covers trying to get away, revealing that his is dressed in desert fatigues.

  • He screams.

  • EXT. FALLUJAH STREET - DAY

  • AMIRA stands in the center of the room, holding a picture of her father in one hand, her other hand clutched at her side.

  • The wind blows her dress around her feet.

  • ROBERT
  • Get down! Get Down!

  • She continues to stand, and Robert moves in, his rifle ready.

  • He grabs her arm and marvels at how smooth it is.

  • She looks him straight in the eye.

  • AMIRA
  • I'm so sorry.

  • She opens her hand and a grenade falls.

  • Robert watches as it descends to the ground as if in slow motion.

  • Its surface buckles as it explodes and shrapnel is hurled around the room.

  • He sees Amira crumple an instant before the wave a metal hits his body.

  • FADE TO BLACK.


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