- FADE IN:
- EXT. DESTROYED TOWN - DAY
- THE SOLDIER walks carefully through the town, crouching behind rubble every so often.
- The silence is total; he tries to move as quietly as possible.
- The silence is broken by the crack of gunfire and a bullet whizzing past him.
- He ducks behind a burned wall, and waits, scanning the opposite side of the street as bullets whiz down.
- He spots the ENEMY in a window of a standing building a little further down the street.
- He takes aim and fires.
- The Enemy slumps.
- The soldier carefully walks past the building, and continues down the street.
- The silence is deafening as he walks on.
- A bullet whizzes past him and he crouches behind a burned wall.
- He stares for a moment, then looks up; the same building is down the road from him, and the Enemy is crouched in the same window.
- He takes aim and fires, then walks on.
- He scans the town, then begins walking again.
- A bullet whizzes past and he doesn't even duck, he turns and fires, killing The Enemy again.
- He looks down and find that he is in front of the wall again.
- He crouches, pulls his knife, and places three notches in the wall, then walks on.
- He walks down the street, and when the firing starts, automatically turns at fires, then ducks down to notch the wall.
- There are over 15 notches now.
- He walks past and within seconds is repeating the cycle.
- He is exhausted and when the gunfire starts, he crouches to make another notch; there are several hundred notches now.
- He closes his eyes and pounds his fist into the wall, then stands, holding his arms wide, giving up.
- A bullet hits his body, then another and another.
- Relief fills his eyes; he falls, and the world goes black.
- EXT. DESTROYED TOWN - DAY
- THE SOLDIER walks carefully through the town, crouching behind rubble every so often.
- The silence is total; he tries to move as quietly as possible.
- The silence is broken by the crack of gunfire and a bullet whizzing past him.
- He ducks behind a burned wall, and waits, scanning the opposite side of the street as bullets whiz down.
- He looks at the wall, and sees the notches cut into it, and his eyes widen as everything floods back.
- He turns and slumps against the wall, his eyes void.
- FADE TO BLACK.
Sunday, June 1, 2008
153. War Games - Leslie
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